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Date: 06 Mar 2007 19:49:58
From: KDP
Subject: analysis and comments
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wouldl someone be kind enough to look over this game and offer some
comments and criticisms? my chess wins are few and far between so its
nice to get one every now and then. the main thing i'm looking for
any major errors/blunders on my part so i can avoid them in the
future. thanks in advance.
[Event "Open invite"]
[Site "http://www.redhotpawn.com"]
[Date "2007.03.04"]
[EndDate "2007.03.07"]
[Round "?"]
[White "me"]
[Black "opponent"]
[WhiteRating "1356"]
[BlackRating "1081"]
[Result "1-0"]
[GameId "3266535"]
1. e4 e5 2. Ng1f3 Ng8f6 3. Nf3xe5 Nf6xe4 4. Qd1e2 d5 5. d3 Bf8b4 6.
Nb1c3 Ne4xc3
7. bxc3 Bb4xc3 8. Ke1d1 Bc3xa1 9. Ne5c6 Bc8e6 10. Nc6xd8 Ke8xd8 11.
Bc1g5 f6
12. Bg5f4 Nb8c6 13. Qe2xe6 Nc6d4 14. Qe6f7 Rh8e8 15. Qf7xc7 1-0
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Date: 07 Mar 2007 10:50:39
From: Antonio Torrecillas
Subject: Re: analysis and comments
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En/na KDP ha escrit:
> wouldl someone be kind enough to look over this game and offer some
> comments and criticisms? my chess wins are few and far between so its
> nice to get one every now and then. the main thing i'm looking for
> any major errors/blunders on my part so i can avoid them in the
> future. thanks in advance.
>
> [Event "Open invite"]
> [Site "http://www.redhotpawn.com"]
> [Date "2007.03.04"]
> [EndDate "2007.03.07"]
> [Round "?"]
> [White "me"]
> [Black "opponent"]
> [WhiteRating "1356"]
> [BlackRating "1081"]
> [Result "1-0"]
> [GameId "3266535"]
>
> 1. e4 e5 2. Ng1f3 Ng8f6 3. Nf3xe5 Nf6xe4 4. Qd1e2 d5 5. d3 Bf8b4 6.
> Nb1c3 Ne4xc3
> 7. bxc3 Bb4xc3 8. Ke1d1 Bc3xa1 9. Ne5c6 Bc8e6 10. Nc6xd8 Ke8xd8 11.
> Bc1g5 f6
> 12. Bg5f4 Nb8c6 13. Qe2xe6 Nc6d4 14. Qe6f7 Rh8e8 15. Qf7xc7 1-0
Before reading our suggestions you should post here your thoughs about
that game, for example ...
- Do you think 6.Nc3 was good, bad or as good/bad as other moves there?
- Was 8...Bxa1 good, bad or as good as other moves?
A good idea is to write if you are proud of your opening phase or not,
if you think black or white made some mistakes., suvggest improvememnts
for both sides, ...
AT
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Date: 07 Mar 2007 05:23:46
From: Ron
Subject: Re: analysis and comments
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In article <[email protected] >,
"KDP" <[email protected] > wrote:
> [Event "Open invite"]
> [Site "http://www.redhotpawn.com"]
> [Date "2007.03.04"]
> [EndDate "2007.03.07"]
> [Round "?"]
> [White "me"]
> [Black "opponent"]
> [WhiteRating "1356"]
> [BlackRating "1081"]
> [Result "1-0"]
> [GameId "3266535"]
>
> 1. e4 e5 2. Ng1f3 Ng8f6 3. Nf3xe5 Nf6xe4 4. Qd1e2 d5 5. d3 Bf8b4 6.
> Nb1c3
A rather huge error. 6.c3 wins a piece. This is good for black. You need
to study tactics until you don't miss something obviously like this
(after 6.c3, white has two pieces attacked by pawns. He can't defend
both of them. The best he can do is Bd6 but then Nf3 and his pinned
knight is attacked by a pawn.
> Ne4xc3
> 7. bxc3 Bb4xc3 8. Ke1d1 Bc3xa1
A massive, massive, massive mistake from your opponent. 8. ... 0-0 or
Qe7 consolidates a massive advantage for him.
> 9. Ne5c6 Bc8e6 10. Nc6xd8 Ke8xd8 11.
> Bc1g5 f6
Kc8 was much stronger.
> 12. Bg5f4
Another very large mistake for you. 12.Qxe6 fg 13.Be2 (threatening Bg4)
is very strong. Even if you don't realize that, however, you should
realize that you're (slightly) up material, so trades are good for you.
> Nb8c6
A hideously bad move. Re8 and black is fine.
> 13. Qe2xe6 Nc6d4 14. Qe6f7
You could, of course, pick up the d-pawn with check here first.
> Rh8e8
Black makes the worst move on the board, giving you a mate.
> 15. Qf7xc7 1-0
At least you don't miss it.
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Date: 07 Mar 2007 16:19:33
From: David Richerby
Subject: Re: analysis and comments
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Ron <[email protected] > wrote:
> "KDP" <[email protected]> wrote:
>> 1. e4 e5 2. Ng1f3 Ng8f6 3. Nf3xe5 Nf6xe4 4. Qd1e2 d5 5. d3 Bf8b4
>> 6. Nb1c3 Ne4xc3 7. bxc3 Bb4xc3 8. Ke1d1 Bc3xa1 9. Ne5c6 Bc8e6
>> 10. Nc6xd8 Ke8xd8 11. Bc1g5 f6 12. Bg5f4 Nb8c6 13. Qe2xe6 Nc6d4
>> 14. Qe6f7 Rh8e8
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> Black makes the worst move on the board, giving you a mate.
14... Kc8 would be just as bad. ;-)
Dave.
--
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www.chiark.greenend.org.uk/~davidr/ a radio that's possessed by Satan but
you can't understand it!
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